|Reviews for “can you sing?”|
| bumble whale 9/1/09 . chapter 1
intriguing notion, patron.
i'm not sure how i would answer that question either.
| forget-me-nots 8/27/09 . chapter 1
This is rather interesting, and quite good.
| Solemn Coyote 8/19/09 . chapter 1
This takes 'simple and effective' to an entirely different level. The structure of the poem isn't terribly complicated (grammatically incorrect commas break up the flow of the piece and force the reader to pick his way through the words. I like the effect,) but the last line really kick-starts the brain of the reader.
I'm not really sure I can critique this piece properly.