"Deep blue [...] the cloudless sky stretches on." This is a very philosophical opening - it's very quiet and gentle.

"But inside I feel empty." I like the raw tone of this line - it's very abrupt and powerful.

"I'm not deserving of your love." Aww, that's so sad!

I like this, its really sweet!

Very nice. The middle section was a little weak, but the tie to the begining and end was very strong and heartfelt. Overall, nice work!