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Servant of the Universe
Zerachielle Bal Des'cagel
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
This sort of feels like a video game version of the Matrix. Not that it is abad thing but I felt kind of lost as to what the setting of the story was.
Orange Oxymoron
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
Something I learned from reading this: We should try to AVOID self-teaching artificial intelligence. That is, if these are robots. If they're actual people, then I have no idea, but I would like to see more.
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