very interesting concept... i hope you take it further!

I am actually excited to read this...well,
I've already loved your writing ever since
I found, "Love Surveys Are For Desperate Romantics,"
in someone's Favorite Stories list. And, I find that you
have a new story? And a multi-chapter one, at that.

You should continue this, and make me happy. (:

THIS WAS WAY TOO SHORT. I'm not even kidding you, I really want more. This is such a unique way of presenting everything, I got addicted from the first paragraph. Moremoremoremoremore. I'll totally be checking back at this story. ;)

This was written beautifully, I'm excited to read more.

ooh, suspenseful already! :)
haha, wonderful.
i heart Hollis's character.
i dont even understand her yet.
but Clay... hm, Clay? or James?
i wonder...
and this sculpture-thing at the end, i wonder what it is.

EK THIS IS TORTURE. So many questions, so much suspense! D: sheesh, woman. You sure know how to get your audience interested. You better update soon, or I smax you - hard. I are slave driver.

Onto writing; amazing descriptions. Also, Hollis' character is really strong, I can't relate to her but I sort of know how she'd react to things happening in her surroundings from what I've read so far. So, hurray! And I hope Clay/James will be a part of the main plot O:

Wow! That was very good! I'm impressed by the way you portray Hollis. She seems like she's got something going on that's eating her up, and I'm dying to know what it is! Excelent!

SO GOOD!! Like, I've read a lot of stories on this site, and this will probably rank in my top fifty. :D I like everything about it, especially Hollis. She seems so different and everything, you know? It's exciting. And stuff. :D

I love her personality, and I find it difficult that Clay and her are going to fall in love because I doubt shes gonna say anything...but who knows? Is she even gonna end up with Clay? And who is Gabriel?! Her brother?! :)

Well hopefully you'll reveal these things sometime later. :]

HEY! Just checking up to see what you've written this time. XD I'm happy to see that this story is freaking amazing! It's totally your standard - amazing! Anyway.. update? Maybe? Totally? It's so mysterious and fun... love it!

Beautiful. :) Please update soon because I think I've just fallen in love.

WorldOfWarcraft!! clay seems like a hot sexy ** and hollis is the ** i love them both k update.
btw i tought her everything she knows
yes tought
and i hate you

Hey XD This is your cousin... and I'm reading the story like you told me to!! It's really nice, honestly... I ddn't expect you to be such a good writer...but you are...-sigh-

IM SO JEALOUS

Wow. This is pretty freaking sick. Dude, I have never met a character like Hollis. Gonna be one hell of a story. Update. If you can, that is.

Yay. XD


Awesome...

FREAKIN' SEXY!

Hollis sounds like the **.