I love how Michael doesn't completely change. I read this in one sitting... and it's a school day. Haha, but then I cram my school work all the time. ;)

If you don't update soon I may die from the suspense of it all :O

woo, I read this a couple days (or weeks? not sure) back, but I'm not sure if I reviewed or not, since I was all busy studyin and what not :)

and I realized I didn't have this story on my favorites, which was a scary moment. I have now fixed that, I think.

I'm really intrigued with how your characters are developing, and I want to see the way these relationships play out.

ps, dude, I actually felt kinda bad for shannon in this chapter? haha. she is so in for it :/

I was really glad to see that Shannon is just dumb/cowardly, because like I said before I'm sick of the slutty girl always being cunning/manipulative too. I hope she's not still acting... because for me, one betrayal is enough coming from her. Slutty does not always = evil, although I'm willing to buy it if she's just looking out for her own best interests.

This new idea is really interesting: Adrian blackmailing Christina into seducing Michael to capture him. I feel like she'll probably agree once she gets scared enough, and then make a genuine effort but completely suck at it because of moral qualms/inexperience with fooling people. Ah, the possibilities... I like where this is headed!

P.S.: I was in the club of people who didn't notice Shannon calling Michael by name - embarrassing! I saw it in someone else's review for the previous chapter, and had to go back to look at it. So I knew about it before this chapter, but wouldn't have if this was a book or something. That was clever! Nice.

And schools are having their Thanksgiving breaks very soon! Here's hoping that means another update! ...Unless you're British or something; I can't remember if you're British.

I'm not sure what Sharon's role is suppose to be? I'm actually not even sure who she is... besides a one night stand.

Two things about this story:
1: FUCKING EXQUISITE.
2: there has to be a sex scene. If there isn't one, I'm going to die. The intensity between Christina and Michael is too explosive to not have a proper, mind-blowing, full-out sex scene.

LAHV YOU

Very impressive story! Paced, interesting, orginal, angsty-without-being-childish; many props to you. Update!

Oh, and here I thought A was related to Michael... like sister? because of their similarities. At the very least because A was coming down and taking care of Christina at Michael's request... so they had to have some kind of relationship of sorts right? If not, then I'm just surprised that she's related to Richardson.

You changed Michael's last name? BTW, any significance that they both seem to be french names?

I can understand why you are portraying Christina as something other than anorexically skinny but from the story, I can't imagine that she's a size 16... I imagine her closer to a 12 or 14ish... (which by way I think the average American woman is a 14)

I love the plot!! I'm just having a problem with the characters' ages. Well, his experience implies that he's been in the business for a while which would make the age difference between him and Christina kind of big... or he's just really good for his age which makes me think that both characters are a little young for such a heavy heavy plot. But, if I ignore this age problem I have, I think I'll be staying up all night reading as much as I can!

It was quite amusing to see my pen-name pop up in the signed in reviewers and the not-signed in reviewers both. See how much I wanted you to continue? :)

This chapter seemed pretty good considering it's two months you last updated. I totally got back into the story and was nearly shrieking in joy there when Adrian was suggesting for Christina to bring Michael in a sexually aroused position.

Small sentiments, eh?

Also well done on slipping Michael's name into the previous chapter w/o anyone picking up on it! I certainly didn't! And normally I pride myself on picking up on these little things...

One thing:

"His lack of affect scared me far more than anger."

His lack of affect? Pardon me if I sound stupid; but what exactly does that mean? I've never come across it before so am doubly curious to know whether it's merely a typo or you actually meant it.

Please update soon. Much love xx

PLEASE do not stop writing, i cant wait to see where this goes.

Finally back 'v'

AWESOME AWESOME 8'D

Adrain's gonna hurt Ed again... D8

I absolutely love your story so please update!