The first time I read this, my friend was leaning over my shoulder, telling me to tell you that the poem was adorable. What I'd like to tell you is that I like this poem because it's earnest and true, not overpowering with a profession of undying love like most poems do end up having. This poem is sweet and simple, I do like it.

That's really nice. It showed all the confusion/uncertainty in the way that not many "love poems" do. I liked the way it spoke directly to the reader.

This is GREAT! I loved the format that you used and how etiquette you were with it that you can actually place yourself in the mind in the moment. Very nice! :)