the last stanza is so amazing i keep reading it over and over again, wrapping my head around its beauty.

That last stanza is really, really beautiful. I don't even know if I want to try translate it, it's just something I can't stop reading.

Jack

i love the last five lines. especially "you know, in alaska, we could escape."
there is something so beautifully casual, so conversational about it...

your writing is as beautiful as ever.
(:

"Warm, saccharine honey." Oh wow. I love this description - it's so sensual. I also love the fact that the woman in this poem feels such a deep-rooted connection to the night - that's beautiful. :)

"We could become silhouettes." This is the best line from the poem - the imagery here is quite stunning. :D

i loved this, it is beautiful. you are an inspiration to me. the way you write is the way i wish i could write, the way i know i COULD write, but i never seem to be able to make the words go down onto paper. sad, isn't it?

the thing about black boys and alaska reminded me of amanda palmer's music. Ampersand and Blake Says, to be exact.

any possible reference?

you don't like this one?
...guh.
well, you should.
because it's amazing.
like your poems always are.

this was very cute, and flowed very nicely to envoke the emotions it was looking to. Very, very sweet, I liked this one. Good job. :)