SO CUTE! SQUE! Love this story! XD!

aw, adorable!

This first reminded me of Eros and Psyche, rather than Beauty and the Beast =P Somehow that didn't even cross my mind. =_=

I really liked this ficlet. I have always been a fan of the selkie myth. I like in this one how it spanned two generations. I think it gave the story more depth. I think this makes a wonderful fairytale. It's short and sweet with a simple but fun plot. I can't wait to see more!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie

I remember some story about some seal skin baby thing before... I like it when I recognize them, it's fun. I feel like I remember this. Which makes me happy. So yay! Good job :) These are always so cute. I love them.

I don't know why you don't like this ficlet. I like it a lot! Reading your stories always leaves me puzzling over bits I think I've heard before but am not sure where... Oh well ;3 I thought that Aelfron was very humorous in an adorable sort of way. I also liked how Ken was able to vaguely feel Elphin. It was romantic. *swoon* Kudos again!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie

Um... so... here's the thing. I feel immensely guilty about liking twincest, but it's pretty much about the cutest thing ever. Because like... they're brothers... but they... y'know... love each other and stuff, and it's just really sweet if done properly, which this is, and... yeah. So. Ignoring all my ellipses, this was very good. I heart them. Good job :D

It was close enough to Tamlin that I recognized it.

The most of the Tamlins that I've read have a girl and her husband or lover. Carrying his blood (in the form of their unborn child) is what allows her to hold him as he switches shape. But I guess twins would also carry each other's blood. I wonder which version came first?

Poor Prince Aelfron, he's not the brightest bulb around.

Was this the Polar Bear King? I don't know the orrininal name(sp) but one of my favorite movies (ancient though it is) is the Polar Bear King and this seems a bit too familiar to just be a coincidence. I did love it though.
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I never know whether to leave one here or on lj.

Yes, it's like all the Aladdins I've read too, even the ones set in China or other places. I like Karvesh. I can understand is anger. Aladdin has two genies and still can't say no to his mother. He never was the sharpest knife in the drawer.

Great job on your adaption. I like it better than the original.

This ficlet was pretty fun to read. I enjoyed the interactions between the genies. It was really cute. I have to say that this must have been some case of love at first site... ;) Kudos!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie

I love it :)

Aladdin is my favorite. I don't care what version or whatever, Aladdin just owns life. I've seen the Disney movie twenty-five-thousand times, I've seen it on stage, I've read it in a million kids' stories books... I love Aladdin. So Aladdin wins. Yay.

Cute chapter, good job, etc :D

This one reminds me of a story I'd heard awhile ago. Can't remember what it was called, but most of this was so very familiar. A very good rewrite.

I like the bandits. Seren seems pretty serene at the end. He doesn't even get excited when he sees the ring. The wizard should have known better. If he would have looked a little farther into the future, he might have seen how useless resisting fate was.

Hmm... This story was interesting. I liked the plot quite a bit and how the wizard just couldn't get around fate. The bandits were funny and made me laugh. :} It does seem a little rushed, or as if this is the edited version. I think this could have been made into a whole novel. But as a oneshot it is wonderful; I really enjoyed it.

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie