 AJeff 2009-08-29 . chapter 1I love it! Especially the notch on the belt part. Some guys just don't get it. Well done! |
 Anonymous 2009-08-22 . chapter 1 I love this. |
 Hollis Winter-Summers 2009-08-21 . chapter 1"I'm no more than another notch on the belt
Another heart that was only worth breaking"
Awesome! Loved it! :D |
 Isca 2009-08-21 . chapter 1"I'm no more than another notch on the belt." I love this metaphor - it's very creative and powerful. :) |
 GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 2009-08-21 . chapter 1LOVED the line "Stop speaking to me as if I'm listening"
It's sad and bitter, yet...snarky at the same time:) Love that.
Write on! |