Oh my.

That didn't end like I thought it going too...

Weird. I normally know how things end up and I did not know for this one.

Awkward.

I was all,"He is going to be with Alex. Wait no, Daniel. Wait no! Foster! NO! Kid!"

Then he ends up with Daniel.

Lame. Like it though. Five high for you.

I feel like Cameron should have ended up with Foster. Cameron and Daniel seem a little bit weird, you know? But, it's your story, and I liked it.

That was awesome - it made me cry! I want Alex to be happy too =(

Just a quick tip... I suggest keeping the story in scene. In other words, don't interrupt the story with too much background information. I feel like this happened at the very beginning, with the information on the different boyfriends, and it didn't feel that necessary. It made me lose interest pretty quickly.

Wow, I like Cameron. He's cool. Great story, if not kind of awkward sometimes.

VERY, very cool! I loved it!