Now this is what I’m talking about. I love the symbolism you played in this story. It gives me goose bumps while reading this. I don’t really know what you mean in this story, what your motives are but I don’t care. I think this is somewhat critical. It’s quite tragic and sad. But I think this is the most realistic story that I had seen from you. I mean, these things happen. Not literally, but the hidden meanings perhaps do happen.

I also like it how you made this story look unfinished. Yeah I appreciate those things. It is a simple story but it’s odd. It’s not something you will appreciate unless you give meaning to it.

Lovely :)