AHHH! when are you gonna update? its already been 13 days or something! please hurry up coz the waiting is killing me...

Yeah, a new chapter! Great :-)

Really great, Matt is a very good person!

We will see, what's coming next!

Mira

Awesome story. You have to write more! i cant wait to read it.

I've just decided. I LOVE Matthew-chapters. And I'm hoping for MORE. ;)

I hate that there's no next button for me to click on :(

But OHMAGAWDZ.

Before this Jess thing happened I thought I knew where this story was going.

ILOVEMATT.

Glad to see another chapter up, and looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds! Lucas seems like bad news, Matthew on the other hand.. :D

lol like the turnaround of bros before hoes to hoes before bros.

she's growing up! can't wait

This was lovely! I loved this chapter a lot and oh my gosh even though I was so freaked out about Jessica and everything, you still managed to make this SUCH a good chapter.

Great job, and I think Bella is finally coming around. She's a great character but sometimes she can do some stupid things. But we all do stupid things and we're all human in the end.

Anyways, I hope Jessica finally talks to Bella and OH MY GOSH to mention Matthew. What a knight in shining armor :P He's really good for Bella and I hope she realizes that soon enough. :)

Update soon this was fantastic!

so many twists and turns, that were unpredicted, can't wait to read more!

Wow its like reading about myself! Bella and i are soooo similar, i can completely relate to her its almost scary. For one, we both seem to panic the same almost exact way!

Also Bella and I seem to have a similar way of treating people like Jessica and how we have one close friend from childhood and a couple other friends but thats pretty much it, a lot of people probably see me as a lonely girl but im -most of the time- perfectly content being like that and only occasionally wishing having more friends and a friendship like in the movies... lol

Other things seem similar buuut its too much to write lol.

So yaa, im enjoyin this so far quite a bit buuut im not a fan of love triangles... is this gonna be a love triangle story?

she so kind and love matthew so much,update fast please.

She tried to commit suicide? Thats insane! No, seriously. I KNOW INSANITY WHEN I SEE IT.

Well, beside from the whole suicide contemplation, this chapter was worth the wait! But I have a problem.

I'm starting to lean towards Matthew. Thats totally off topic, I know, but... gee. I don't know .o.

So, this is promising... but there was something about the way you write that just seems... too formal?

I'm not really sure how to explain it. As I was reading this chapter I just kept thinking it's really stuffy writing. Not bad, just... stiff.

I'm sorry. I'm bad at critique, but your writing is good and there is definite promise here.

I really love this story, but you should update sooner.

I like Matthew better, and poor Jess. So much chaos the morning after!