|Reviews for My Roommate's Shoes|
| Amy90 10/29/12 . chapter 34
LOL, she's being so stupid. She's completely in love with Matt, but she's in denial. Jessica should tell Matt her theory, I'm sure this would help him hold on. Just in case the kiss didn't give it away. :D
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! :)
| mylittleprincess 10/29/12 . chapter 34
can't wait for the sequel.
| Chakara1winxclub 10/29/12 . chapter 34
i don't think u should end this one bcuz u haven't reached a real ending. u just wrote sth & said completed like u don't want 2 continue this anymore. i'm not saying a happy ending but this is definitely not the ending u call 'good'. i'm sry, it hurts, i know. but this ending is kinda shallow. one tht a nut-head would write. u should re-write it or at least make its sequel better. i don't expect the best, but i want u 2 use ur full potential. sry but u should.
| delight.full 10/29/12 . chapter 34
Not an ending I expected at all! But now that I know there will be a sequel it makes more sense. Looking forward to reading about Bella and Matthew!
| StaNdUPtomE 10/29/12 . chapter 34
Yes their does need to be a sequel a lot of... unfinished buisness.
But it ended how it should have, she would nave never just flipped to Matthew, I mean it took her forever to get with Lucas... its just who she is...
So can't wait for more! I'll be waiting
| Asrialth 10/29/12 . chapter 34
Oh my god, I can't believe it is already the end! I totally loved the entire story. I haven't reviewed every chapter individually, and I'm sorry for that. I always want everyone to do that with my stories and now I failed to do it with yours. But it's the thought that counts, isn't it?
And my thoughts are: I think you should publish it. Write a sequel, send it to a publisher and find yourself on the shelves next to Stephenie Meyer, E.L. James and Marianne Keyes. Though your writing is better than Meyer's and exceptionally better than James's (Fifty Shades sucked big time).
I always dreamed of writing a story that I'd actually finish, and I'm infinitally jealous that you did it with seemingly so little effort. I say seemingly, because I can believe it was a hard process.
Anyhow, I loved it. I was a little bit in dubio about the end, though, since I wanted to simultaneously punch you for not getting Bella and Matt together and praise you for not ending this story like the next ordinary chicklit. My inner swoony girl wanted Matt and Bella to kiss and make up, of course. But at the same time I'm a sceptist about all the women's books and movies where the main characters always get together in the end. Your ending was a more.. unconventional one. And a more realistic one. I liked that.
Anyhow, I'd say: send it to Little, Brown and Company and make yourself rich :) You did a great job.
Eline Aka Asrialth
| foxyricanlady 10/29/12 . chapter 34
Ok.. ammmm im not sure where to to start but here it goes nothing. When I started reading this story I really liked it but in the last few chapters its gotten dull and kind of boring. I dont sound mean or anything I just think you can do better. Bella is becoming a clichè and jess is like that slutting high school girl that it so dump and want all the attancion. And matt is a little to nice. I just hope you can bring them back to what really made me like this story so much.
| missyb1988 10/19/12 . chapter 33
Omg amazing! I have been reading this none stop today. I knew lucas was a sleaze and glad she likes matt :) Please hurry with the last chapter, don't think I can wait lol!
| mylittlePRINCESS 10/17/12 . chapter 33
| deadkitty1 10/15/12 . chapter 33
Glad she's sorting her thoughts. Don't want her to jump right in when she's not fully committed.
| nicole7579 10/14/12 . chapter 33
geez bella finally gets a clue. and yay matt for stepping up.
I was seriously wondering where this story went and we only have ONE CHAPTER?! I hope the sequel will be about bella and matt making their relationship work. bella still has a lot of growing up to do and we don't know enough about matt.
and hopefully more insight on jessica. I'm loving the bella/jessica honest friendship. i would love to see jessica's character built up more.
| delight.full 10/14/12 . chapter 33
Best chapter yet. Matthew is such a great match for Bella. Can't wait to read the next update!
| Amy90 10/14/12 . chapter 33
Nice chapter! Can't wait to read the next one. I'm SOOOO glad Matt finally grew some and told her. And Ihope Bella'll come to her senses soon and realize that she's in love with him too... ;)
| foxyricanlady 10/14/12 . chapter 33
Yeah i love sequels... Please update soon
| Guest 10/2/12 . chapter 1
Well, you know what they say about a guy with small feet...