Definitely a refreshing point of view, and it's at a perfect length - any extension would spoil the strengths. Also excellently written, the bluntness of the style fits the story so well.

Dam. I could see this turning into more, though it's definitely intriguing all by itself.

Whoa! Short, but so intense.
And so amazingly written (as every story I would expect from you) I would certainly rate a 10/10 if there was any rating thing here at FP. You have a way with the words that keep me one hundred percent interested.
I have always kept that opinion that some people hate and condemn things they wish they could have but can't. I suppose this oneshot expresses that thought really well.
Did I ever tell you I'm your fan? Yes? Well, it doesn't hurt to say it again, right? Just for the records. XD Hahaha ~
Kep on writing

WOW! This is intense!

Fucked up kind of beautiful

After reading this piece for the first time, I was so impressed that I couldn't figure out what to say in my review. Seriously, this is definitely well written. I absolutely love the perspective - it was honest and straight to the point, especially with the sentence structure. You captured the point of view of a homophobic homosexual quite well. I can feel the emotions going on with the main character, and I understood his reason for hitting the guy before towards the end.

Overall, great job. :-)

Wow. This was really beautiful. I mean, obviously it's horrible, but there's just something about it that's wonderful. I think I figured it out when he addressed "you" that he didn't really hate Gregory Allen. I don't know, it seems so sad and frightening, and it's completely relevant, which is always good. Just wonderful. Thanks for writing!

Wow... *blink, blink*

I think I need a moment to process. =D

(Oh, yeah, and before I can forget FIRST REVIEW IS MINE! ò.ó)

I liked the story. The theme, so to speak. You made my heart beat a bit faster there...

I'm just not so sure about you using "you" there. Because you started writing about the other guy and all, it was a bit confusing when you said "you and him". I don't know, it felt somewhat weird, but not bad. I liked it when I got used...

Good to see you publishing stuff again! I missed your things! =D
I'm now busy trying to write one chapter per day of that fic in POrtuguese of mine, see if I can finish it before the holidays are over, so I haven't had much time to write about other things... i.i

Nah, good to read you again! =DD
(YEs, I know it sounds weird. I know. BUt that is not enough to change the sentece. =D)

James