That first part made me say 'ooh my godd'.

(I like speaking english when i'm alone at home.)

Now, i'm not nodding.

This is so good, i'm shaking my head.

Like, i can't believe this is so awesome, but i can, because you wrote it.

You know what i mean. :D

Ths was good, great work. It was very emotive, I thought the dream part at the beginning was good. :)