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Duuude 2009-11-14 . chapter 3
Just wanted to put this review to be the 200th!
lol.
Great chapter!
:)
Duuude 2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Loved it!
I love how easily he was convinced that Speedy wasn't her boyfriend. Haha, he's so harmles even to Nicholas and he's LIVING with them. :P
I love Speedy. Have I said that already?
And hooray, he's staying! More awkwardness for Lorri! :)
CatherineYen 2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Ahahaha, I lovee Speedy! :DD
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Miss.Shad0w 2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Thanks for the lovely updates! I'm from Malaysia, Penang to be exact. Just a small little island. You should visit one day :D
And I absolutely adore Speedy. Gosh talking about tanpons and sanitary pads in front of Nicholas made my day! And I've read all your other updates as well :D
Sorry for not leaving a review in your other stories. Actually, I'm not supposed to be online as I'm having a major exam on Wednesday. I should be studying now! Thanks again for the updates!
Lulla Sinatra 2009-11-13 . chapter 1
To the milk bottle,

To be honest, I never really liked Cheerios. They're too... grandma-flavored. Wait! Not that I eat grandmas or anything! Eew! I mean... yeah.

Your calcium deficient friend,

Lulla Sinatra
Evilgenius Koji 2009-11-12 . chapter 4
Okay, so I admit that I only just caught up with the last 3 chapters...I was having iffy moments all these weeks, but really, what was I expecting but awesomeness from YOU? I love this story now. xD
Dianarra 2009-11-12 . chapter 4
AWW! I love this chapter and I also think it's my favorite chapter so far. Nicholas makes an appearance! Like finally! And the way you played everything out, from the way Lori reacted when she saw him (her mouth hanging open without having swallowed the chip crumbs) to the way they said goodbye at the door, with him about to say something but deciding against it...aw! You are ingenious :) Can't wait for the update!
Amarantis 2009-11-12 . chapter 4
I liked his return very much so...:D
SpotWillRuleTheWorld 2009-11-11 . chapter 4
awesome! by the way...what is for dinner?
Corey Wilcox 2009-11-11 . chapter 4
Nicholas is so cool!! I want a guy to write a song for me too! Instead, the last guy I had a crush on was in senior year of high school and I later found out that he was gay and scared of me. I hate it when they're gay!! D:>
Inspired-Delusions 2009-11-11 . chapter 4
I loved this chapter, literally had me smiling alot while reading this. I agree with you about the eye contact, it definitely helps showing their emotions alot more, makes it more intense and well realistic. :D
Emilea 2009-11-10 . chapter 4
oh my lordy. thanks for updating!! i hope to see the next chap soon!
arawrable 2009-11-10 . chapter 4
:D Happy happy happy!
I love it! I hope to see more soon!
sunshinernnr 2009-11-09 . chapter 4
What a twist! I didn't see this one coming but I like it. Lori is adorable!! (How can Nick NOT fall in love with her :))
Amarena 2009-11-09 . chapter 4
Hahaha... Speedy, you get the big prize.
I think I like this Nicholas better. And I see the differences - from now on it'll be like reading a completely original story.
The milk bottle, you've got a gift for writing. If it comes from your easygoing-ness, then never let it go.
I didn't leave a review for To Love a Loser because I was pressed on time, but it was a good chapter. That writers' block of yours didn't hurt you much.
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