This poem was a bit more abstract and surrealistic then the others. I really loved how you used the description of peacock feathers - the birds themselves are so lush and foppish, and even a little stand-offish and it made me invasion this person with such a personality. I also really liked ‘silent appetite’ it’s mysterious multifaceted. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)