Bravo! It was really good. Short, but good. I like how you are staying on track with the story. It is flowing along quite nicely. =) Please update soon so we can read more! It's very good!

This seems like it could be a really good story. I like it A LOT so far. You should update really soon so we know what is going to happen. Also I love your characters! Good Job!

Very good chapter!

Much longer is what I like to see ^.^

xAshleyx

heyy! i like this chap! i rly cant wait for the next, one, and its pretty cool that your writing a bit longer chapters, even though you dont really want to ^_^
its great! update soon!!
xoxo
Emsy

Looks like you've got a good start. It seems like there's been a lot of stories about mutes lately. Is that a new trend, I wonder? Lol.

Anyway, it's pretty good. Chapters are a little short, but I understand that sometimes it's hard to writer longer ones. I really like the way you describe things, and the narrative style itself. Very nice.

Can't wait for more. :)

- KE

lovelovelove it!
cant wait for more!
hope you update soon!
--ifly*hugs*

So I take it the character in your story is a mute right? She either cannot talk, or refuses to talk due to post-traumatic experiences am I right? Who knows, I cannot wait for your story to develop more.

(: i really like this story so far... but i just wanna make sure, shes a mute, right?
haha.
uhm do you think you could write longer chapters? it would make the story better, but its already good, (even though much hasnt happened yet, but still)
xoxo
Emsy

Seems like it'll be an interesting story. Interesting way of introducing the character. Hope to read more soon.