this is so sweet!

So sweet! The ending is lovely. :)

This is really sad.
I espcialy liked "it echoes the wind through the trees and mocks (the) rivers" I think you can take out the 'the'.
"Take this soul of mine and feed the hungry brood" is also good.

Glad to see your back writing!

Narq

This is so moving and deep. what religion are you?