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Zedler 2009-11-09 . chapter 5
Really like the story cant wait for more. And I wanted to be the left blinker on a car. No joke. That noise they make is just so exciting.
chooseme20 2009-11-02 . chapter 5
i love adriaan he's so funny i wish everyone was him..please update i want him and alex to get together
nonaccount 2009-11-01 . chapter 5
I like this and I like the jock's p-o-v too. :)
Breath Caught Holding 2009-11-01 . chapter 5
I kinda loved this chapter. Its about time Adriaan helped Alex pull his head out of his ass. I mean how long can you go on saying that he best thing about Adriaan is that he likes to cuddle and then keep saying that you're not gay. Cuddling with another guy sounds pretty gay to me. I'm a little upset that I have to wait for another update. I'd like to just read more now. I suppose that's the story of my fanfiction life.
When I grow up I want to be a sex thereapist.
honey splattered brains 2009-10-28 . chapter 5
YOU ARE GAY, ALEX YOU ASSHOL E. YOU LIKE A BOY. YOU LIKE BOYS. YOU DO NOT LIKE GIRLS. WTF. and i love the part where adriaan said he had sticky underwear and he was still wearing them ahahahaha xDD and aww. D: but but but. they are a couplee. dumb alex. hurry up and get back together and admit youre gay. XD
Natural and fake beauty 2009-10-27 . chapter 5
i wanna be a fashion designer. and adriaan is so made at him. its so obvious.
kazoua 2009-10-27 . chapter 5
I think I love your writing style. It's so... uh... I dunno. Unique? But it's more than just unique. You make it nice and it fits. Some parts make me laugh but some parts make me really sad. Your boys are cute and sexy as hell, but I think the way you write them give them this real life flair. Because, haha, truthfully, most people don't think in long soliloquies of woe and drama.
big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-10-27 . chapter 5
CRY. No! Nano is for losers! Don't let them tell you what to do! Don't go with the flow! Nonconform, unconform, disconform! You don't have to do stupid ol' NANOWRIMO! Instead... you should focus on this. Because. Adriaan. Is obviously the sex. Mmhmm. Yes. Adriaan is better than stupid ol' nano.

Do I really have to be all like, "Nice chapter?" Because I'm pretty sure it was VERY APPARENT. Yes. Yum. Adriaan can have my soul. Mhmm. Yeah.
DRAGONFIRE04 2009-10-27 . chapter 5
The job I wanted when I grew up was to be a vet. The reason I had a deep love for animal. Right now I am finishing my associate degree for early child education. I can't wait until the next chapter.
chooseme20 2009-10-25 . chapter 4
I'm in love with this story right now. Please Please Please Update.
Jem the writer 2009-10-23 . chapter 2
“How did you get into my house?”
“How come you are wearing pants?”
“I hate you,”
“I love you,”
“Get out,”
“Get in,”

May I say that that particular bit was epic xD Awesome story. Keep it up.

~JEM~
big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-10-15 . chapter 4
I wanna I wanna I wanna touch TYSON RITTER'S PENIS.

It is late. I have history homework. Would you believe that Adriaan is hotter than Martin Luther? This story is distracting me.

No offense, but your grammar's a little wonky sometimes. I think it's mostly typos, though, because it like, almost makes sense, but there's like, teensy mistakes. I like the plotline, though, and your characters are absolutely huggable. So. It's all good, really. I wantz an Adriaan. Can I has one? or maybe an update would suffice ;) We'll see.

Post more soon?
big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-10-15 . chapter 1
Adriaan is a fucking crazy. I'm not going to lie. But I'm intrigued. So I'm going to keep reading.
pain-stricken lover 2009-10-14 . chapter 4
LOL AWESOMELY HOT CHAPTER! My fav fruit is mango...but i like strawberries too.did you know that strawberries are an aphrodisiac?? i didn't until last month when i couldnt stop eating them, and my boyfriend kept getting hotter and hotter.lmao i researched it.
kazoua 2009-10-14 . chapter 4
I'm skipping school, but instead of having fun and being a crazy teen, I'm taking care of my baby brother. I suck, a lot.

I'm convinced now, more than from the last chapter, that Adriaan has some big, dark, evil secret.
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