please write more
the story is amazing and i love it
i really wanna know what's gonna happen
you're a really good writer so please please write more.

wow that was reely reely awesomeness! :D cant wait for the next chapter :)

omg! that was reely reely good! :D

I really, really, REALY LOVED IT! It's got my adrenalin pumping! x3

I hope that bastard Jericho dies in the end! He's such a fuggin moron! *takes out shovel and beats him up until you see his brains fly everywhere*

There we go, *nod, nod* now he's dead! :3

But seriously, pleaze, plox, with sweet honey comb cherries on the top flying with lucky charms' magic air balloons, PLEASE post the next chapter!

wOw your idea is brillaint. good start, i like it

U better update!! i really like it! good job