I'm liking where this is going- and I'm instantly drawn to your characters which is always good :). This story looks like it's going to be fab. Update soon please!

To be honest, I wasn't expecting much when I clicked on the URL. But then I read it and the story sounds very articulate and interesting. It's basically sounds like the type of story I'd enjoy reading.
You should definitely continue.

Popped it =)

And, of course, it is hearted.

I do hope to see more from this front.
xox