That was a very good chapter for all the background knowledge. It backs up a lot of the things mentioned in this story.

Great job!

~Mo~

this is good!
the grammar, etc, could use some more work, but the plot is good
i like it!
more soon?

Aww! That is so sad :'(

Poor Marian...

And poor Helena! She has almost no idea to what is going on :(
But, i did notice that she was named after Marian's grandmother. Is there a reason for that?

And, of course, Poor Ash... But I guess he kinda placed it on himself, in a way :/


UPDATE SOON!

~Mo~

I don't exactly understand the spell, could you please explain it a little better?

I LOVE this chapter tho :) It fills a lot of gaps

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!

~Mo~

OMG. OMG. OMG.

Haha! Is it Ash?! I hope it is... :)

This is getting really interesting. I'm intrigued by this Marian Rose.
I see the chapters are a bit longer. Well done :)

Keep up the good work,
O.N.J.

This looks promising. You have a very refined writing style and it seems very professional.
But, the chapters could be longer.

I'll be keeping my eye on this.

O.N.J.