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Carlotta Lynn 2009-11-27 . chapter 24
That was so great! I have tears! The ending was perfect! I am so glad I got to read this! I hope to read more from you in the future! Gah, so great!
Mirabella 2009-11-25 . chapter 1
I like it! And i like the characters views on Prince Charming. :)
bookworm411 2009-11-24 . chapter 5
Just wanted to mention that when Gabriel was talking about his past you said "this day, nearly four years ago" and its either spot on or no. Just thought it might help the flow of the story a little better. I'm really liking it so far, especially since they are all in AP classes :)
sorryshards 2009-11-23 . chapter 24
Oh my. I can't believe this is over. D:

First off, I'm glad you didn't get them together until the end. It ** me off because they were obviously meant for each other but I guess the waiting and anticipation made it that more gratifying when they finally got together.

And, I love your quotes/lyrics at the beginning of each chapter. I tried to listen to the song when I read each chapter.. which is was pretty awesome.

Your characters were pretty deep, sort of unrealistic, but it made it more fun to read. (Someone's gotta live the ideal life, right?) Plus, I never noticed anything horrid about the grammar.

Overall, amazing fic and I can't wait for more writing from you! :)
luv2read123 2009-11-23 . chapter 24
I loved this story! I think its the best i have read in my life. I love it so much that i am speechless! LOL! That is the best story i have ever read in my life!
RoseLife 2009-11-22 . chapter 24
LOVED THIS STORY!
took me a while to read
but i loved it
well done!
its gorgeous, maybe a bit predictable for some bits, but all in all mostly realistic
good job ^_^
A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-11-16 . chapter 25
oh baby is already a storii
castiel89 2009-11-16 . chapter 25
I actually think the title name of OH, BABY is kinda clever. Therefore, my vote is for that one!

I'm excited you are planning out another story! It sounds interesting already and I cannot wait to read it!
nia-amilia 2009-11-16 . chapter 25
bundle of lies?
thats all i could think of.
its like a bundle of joy for the baby
and lies is for the lies about the baby
hence bundle of lies
pbgurl 2009-11-16 . chapter 25
The first one, definately! It caught my eye the moment I read the title and it sounds catchy.

Also, I'm so freaking excited you are writing another story! I can't wait to read it!

are you gonna write another authors note like this one to let us know your new story is up?

-Liz :D
x.freyja.x 2009-11-16 . chapter 24
i loved this story :) it's so good. i love your characters and they made me smile. my parents told me off for reading this when i should've been doing my homework :/ anyway, it's an amazing story
Soler Underwood 2009-11-09 . chapter 2
i love this chapter so much! It reminds me a lot of my friend's story! She fell for a bad boy last yr! But she till dsnt dare 2 tell him til now! :)
Tesco Metro 2009-11-08 . chapter 24
This story was brilliant! I really enjoyed reading it...even though it took me a week to get through it all...
You're characters are really strong and their internal dialogue is entertaining to read through! Great Job!

ps. I'm sure someone's told you this already, but I'd just thought I'd mention that the drinking age in Italy is 16. And the don't card there. They're pretty chill about everything.
keisha hanaquil 2009-11-06 . chapter 1
love it
midnight989 2009-11-03 . chapter 24
I just had to tell you that I added this to my favorites, something that's really not easy for me to do. Sure, a lot of stories start out well, but then the author starts getting writer's block, and the flame that had inspired their great work just kind of goes out, ruining what could have been a great story. But this one didn't. Samara and Gabriel stayed true to their characters till the end, and the story continued being a fun read (I'm still sad that it's over) And I just have to thank you for sharing it with us, because it truly is a wonderful story :D
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