Your Last Update: 4 months and 18 days ago. And what does that mean? that's means FINALLY, ABOUT FUC*ING TIME! yes, yes, I know I'm being an asinine hypocrite (more stuff we learned from English!!), but hey, you're the one that keeps in contact with me...although if you didn't, I'd probably sell you out to the cops...ah well. on to the actual story...

well what can I say? it's a beautiful masterpiece! ok, maybe BEAUTIFUL is a bad adjective here...but you get the point. amazing maybe? yeah, that sounds better. add a "fuc*ing" in front, put it in ALL CAPS, and you've got yourself a good description of this story!

THIS WAS FUC*KING AMAZING!

JESUS I thought i wsa reading an actual book or something by some professional author. when I remembered it was by you, I was like HOLY **. like kyle (we finally picked out a guy name for her!) said, lots of complicated moral compass cr*p =D throw in some great description, some page-turning suspense, a little mystery, some guns and drugs here and there, and a full course of JAIME and you've got a story worthy of FUC*ING AMAZING. and yes, I am FULLY aware of how gay and corny that sounded =]

so...on to the last and funnest part of the review...the threats! but you already know the deal. you know, if you don't update soon you'll find yourself in some unlikeable situations...metal chastity belt with a lock...tongs...knives...teletubbies...nun-chucks...no icecream...Iron Maiden...chains...** pear...toothbrush...well you get the picture ;)

ps- you lost the game

pps- KATE MINE IS LONGER THAN YOURS! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh my god.

Oh my god.

OH MY GOD, JAIME POSTED SOMETHING!

Excuse me while I go hyperventilate in the corner and lapse into shock, if such a combination is medically possible.

*Later*

...Wow. This is just... wow, I still can't get over the fact that you would write a shiny new story and post it it here on good old Fictionpress! It's like... unheard of!

Anyway, I like it a lot so far! Suspenseful, full of dark ethical questions and all the stuff they say in English class regarding the moral compass (which is basically nothing)... gah, it's awesome. Congrats on this new story, James! You said you had a plan for it, hmm? That means I expect regular updates, chop chop!

This time I'm the one who get's to say that. It feels weird.

Put short, it's great. Continue it.