I like how this one connects to the first one. The time passing and remembering idea carries through which makes it seem like a coherent collection.

I do think maybe each number of years should be a new stanza. I think that formatting would look better.

I liked the ending. The way you describe those people is really great.

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I really liked the beginning. The imagery was great.

"The people remembered them,/decades after they became a memory.".. I liked remembered and then memory. That slight repetition sounded good to me.

The ending is really sad. I also like though how you fast forwarded so many years. That was unique idea.

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