Well this seems pretty good so far. I want to see more soon, so hurry up and post the next chapter! :)

This story is off to a good start. I'm not usually one for ghost stories, but you really grabbed my attention. But, overall, you might want to consider this one question: What is the theme here? I mean, it's obvious this ghost girl has a strange past and all, and apparently Oscar is to die at some point, but otherwise, it honestly seems like just a bunch of events squished together.

Don't get me wrong, I really do like this story. I'm just telling you where I stand at this point. I would really like to see this story carried out, though.

Keep on rockin'!

pretty good! Keep writing!