 Little girl Big world 2009-08-25 . chapter 1This is so simple and honest. Very sad especially the ending.
I like the repetition of it is ok, you really get it into the readers head.
This piece was different from others because it's being said that things are okay and that this person letting go and most poems like this I've read, or wrote, the person is trying to hold on. So this was unique. A good piece :) I enjoyed reading! |