OH.

I love this Nicole!

Write more!

Miss you!

I think the idea for this is great, but so far the story is riddled with missing capitalization, it jumps fom scene to scene, and you have the typical ditzy characters who like shouting. Of course, it's only two chapters in, and I like the summary and the story idea, so maybe it'll get better as it continues.

good luck!

I have to say that the summary caught my eye. Especially the Zac Efron quip. :P

i love it!

thats hilarious

shes such a freak

...which is sad cause

she kinda reminds me of me

-ifly*hugs*

cliche is cool though.

Love it! xx

Haha this is hilarious!... well not the concept of the story... That's really kinda sad... but the main characters is awesome! I love how she's kinda just out there, reminds me of me a little...except even when I am looking right in front of me I still manage to run into people and then they think I did it on purpose when really I didn't I was just thinking and kinda go blind when I think and walk...yeah anyway this is a really good story! I wanna see what happens next! I wanna know who she ran into! PALease update son!

Tootles,

Roselyn

what if i say update ten times?

one down nine to go

update update update update update update update update update

all done :) cant wait for more

hope you update soon

-ifly*hugs*

You're writing again, yay!

This looks very promising, and I hope you'll keep writing it, but you should always write a story that you enjoy writing, or else there's no fun in writing. _

I am really looking foreward to reading it...I hope you do right more.

So...your summary got me interested, and so I'm wondering in what direction you're going to go from here on. I'm sure that this could turn into a pretty fascinating story.

Though, what I can say right now is that you shouldn't base whether you will consider writing some more on the number of reviews you get (or alerts, even)...yes, they can be encouraging, but you should do it because you like doing it. Please don't take this the wrong way or anything. It's mostly because I would love to read more, and if you don't get the required ten people who want to read this that you're looking for than I'm just afraid that the readers that DO want to read some more will not get the chance.

I hope you do continue on with this :)

please update!

i like the idea it sounds interesting!

This sounds very clever and funny. Please do update.

i have a feeling this Sam Maddock dude is the pr skater guy that was mentioned in your story summary :) I'm sure it'll get more intense once the story starts, so UPDATE SOON!

P.S. just to let you know, i don't think people will review the prologue and tell you to update soon... I'm not being mean or rude or insulting you or anything, but the prologue is a prologue and it's nothing more than an introduction to the story. and your prologue is really short, so it doesn't really give into much detail. UNLESS, you were talking about story alerts! then that's a whole 'nother story! :) GOOD LUCK with this story and update! Cause I KNOW it's gonna get interesting! XD

hope you update soon! this story seems very unique and its a great idea!