It's very odd. I don't understand the "poison cake", or why someone would sell one, but I like it's bluntness.

That's terribly sad, but it's a pointed sadness. If people don't care enough about other people, they'll find themselves alone. Your syntax and word choice excelently convey lonlieness, with a slight twinge of regret. Keep up the good work.

Interesting. I'm trying to figure out the meaning of the second line, it could mean different things. ... This is like pretty and pretty sad. Hm.

O that’s terrible, but it’s good. How could you write such a thing? The last line reminded me of a Haiku.

Short and sweet. Very beautiful!!