I liked how you gave sleep a gender; usual it’s made (via the sandman and such) but I like how you turned her into a mythical silver-wearing chick. It was unique. The poem was a bit short I think, it might strengthen it to add a few more lines, to really drive the message home. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)

:O
stop not liking your writing.
yo' crazy, girl.

I adore this poem. The last two lines are my favorite, and the imagery is amazing. c:

Congratulations on yet another superb piece of work, dahling.

It's familiar. I'm halfway to being a full-blown insomniac. :) Nice job.

"flirting with my eyelids"; I really love that line. Great imagery or whatnot right there. As well with the sleep = lady. The non-structured poem structure was easy and pleasant to read. Basically, GO YOU! :D