I love this story. :]

Love this story

I want more so pease update soon!

can't wait to see more!

It would be great if you could capitalize the first word in your sentences, along with the word "I." It makes it easier to read and follow this way.

Wow. The writing style is different but cool. I can imagine the entire thing, it reminds me of an old movie like played on one of those things with the films on top. The beginning was kind of confusing cuz I didnt know if it was a guy talking for a gurl talking. Are you going to put names to these characters? I love the writing style. I hope I was helpful! Keep up the fantastic job! :)

This can't turn out well, that's for sure. Dx

Okay, I must say, I just love this first chapter as a standalone. It's too cute.

i like the no name rule.
because it allows the reader to imagine the characters as WHOMEVER they want him to be.
:)

i do like surprises.

(i'm sorry for these useless reviews, by the way.
i'm in a mood and just kind of winging everything.)

i do like this chapter. very very much.
especially the last line.
which kind of makes up for his forgetful memory.
:)

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i like the imagery you give us by
using the ocean blue and map reference. :)

ah! ah! ah! i'm at a loss.
because i found this while perusing through the Fiction section on my S.L. Gunn account.
but IT'S YOU! and i always review/talk to YOU through young and the reckless.

do you SEE my dilemma?!

(and no, i am NOT overreacting)

:D

anyway, i can tell i'm going to like this one.
already, i'm all bubbly inside. woohoo! :)

OMG! I love this so far! I know it's more like the Prologue or whatever, but I just love it already! You should update this as much as you can because all the other people that subscribe to their stories, they don't update until like 2 months after the next! Anyways, love it! :)

i like it can't wait to see more! so please update soon!