 letyoursoultakeflight 2009-11-15 . chapter 1Ha =] This is all kinds of excellent! Love it =] |
 LostInMe 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Excellent! I was wondering where this was headed. Unexpected and amusing.
Also, I love her name. |
 Eternal Skies 2009-09-07 . chapter 1i liked it! your one-shots are so creative and amusing though i didn't get the lawyer part (sorry, lol, my head processes slowly) |
 surroundedANDalone 2009-09-05 . chapter 1I was waiting for it, the clever punch line, and then bam, there it was. Lawyer. Simple and amusing. |
 Isca 2009-09-01 . chapter 1"Vampira van Vamp." A Dutch vampire, ja! :)
"Mother was so distraught that she lingered beside his grave until sunrise." I love this part - it's so beautiful and tragic.
"No, it isn't. I'm going to be a lawyer." Ahahaha. I like this plot twist - it's so comedic. |
 SirScott 2009-08-29 . chapter 1That was pretty funny.
~SirScott |
 Doxie Doll 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Haha.
Very nice.
-Jessica |
 East-0f-Eden 2009-08-27 . chapter 1lol, very funy and very clever. :) |
 Sergeant Rock 2009-08-27 . chapter 1This is good as a short, humorous story. |
 Mirabella 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Nice one! A modern day bloodsucker!
Well executed. :) |
 Na'rmer 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Good one. Here's something to chew on.
THE LAWYER : Doctor, how many of your autopsies were made on dead people?
WITNESS : All of them. Those still living, well, they pose too much of a fight. |
 nasty devil the big bully 2009-08-27 . chapter 1very interesting...i was a bit shocked when i started to read it...but at the end i liked it.
it was fun to read i could imagine the sight in my head. i hope to read the next part
i have only started fiction press so i'm still a bit lost.
don't be scared cos of my pen name i'm not that scary...
it was created just to frighten people..bad people ...HAHAHAHA |