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Reviews For: Hush
Moon-Chaser 2009-09-12 . chapter 1
I like this, it seems very contained, if that makes sense to you, like you contained your anger when writing this.

Keep it up.
airplanes and oceans 2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Beautiful piece.
Great job capturing that moment when you just get fed up.
Alice World 2009-08-27 . chapter 1
I love the onomatopoeia of the 'hush' which makes it sound like someone is whispering in your ear. The simplicity of the poem is also very effective, as it leaves the reader wondering what has happened.
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