this piece is written so beautifully. the ending is perfect, the way you've combined both voices. hopefully the speaker can find it in themselves to tell the truth, so they don't her themselves, or the boy, anymore.

k.X

I loved this. :D Really well-written. I think there should be more punctuation though.

Oh wow.
I love this piece.
It makes you feel so guilty, because you know that on the surface, that person is absolutely PERFECT, but you still don't love them.
Thanks for saying this in a way I never could.