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GoldieHotcakes 2009-11-01 . chapter 5
Poetry person.

THIS IS SO GOOD!

Really!

Ahh!
GoldieHotcakes 2009-11-01 . chapter 2
I didn't realize you posted more stuff since you joined. I loved this chapter. It was so good. You're a poetry person.
Little girl Big world 2009-10-05 . chapter 19
This is almost exactly me!
Little girl Big world 2009-10-05 . chapter 16
Love the poem at the end.
Sorry to hear about the bad grades I'm failing a class too, it sucks :/
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 15
The good note is good :)
The bad notes are bad. I hate being grounded :(
I enjoyed reading this very much and if you update I'll try to come back and read more!
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 14
I love the concept of pillowbooks.
First of all, its fun to say and is made up of my two favorite things, pillows and books.
Second, I love reading them because it all tends to be more personal and I feel I get to know the person better through reading.
Lastly, I love writing them because I love being able to have something to say but not necessarily having a place to put it, and like you said not having to worry if its perfectly structured. It's kind of just like a journal where I write all my thoughts and I like that.
Basically I just find pillowbooks entertaining, informative, and very intriguing.
Yeah, pillowbooks are definitely a trend but even when they go outta style I'll still write them because they're fun :D
Now to end my long ranting review I will say I'm going to go read the next chapter.
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 13
Oh oh oh! I love the song Thunder! It's one of my top favorite songs :D
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 12
I liked this! And then I like how in your authors note you explained your thoughts yet again after re-reading your own work.
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 10
Oh I like how there was no punctuation used in this like your just blurting it all out in one big breath. It adds nicely to the piece.
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 9
Good piece, I like the whole one word on a different line thing going on.

P.S. the review for chapter six, what I put as "past" is supposed to be part. I can't type well XP
But you can't review the same chapter twice so I'm letting you know my mistake in the review for this chapter :)
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 8
I'm sorry, I hope things get better soon!
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 6
Loved it! Especially the past about love not being cookie cutter shapes. And once again I must say I love the format :D
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 5
Amazing! I too just wrote a list of things to describe myself but oh wow, you actually made your list rhyme and portray things you hate/like/love. I'm jealous and wish I could pull that off. Well done!
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 4
Aw I'm sorry. I've been there, well actually I am there right now.
Wanting to stop thinking of them, most of the time. Swearing you won't write about them, that never works.
As cliched as it sounds time will make you feel better.
"{As if I don’t secretly love thinking of you}
{As if I don’t secretly dream you think of me}"
-Love these lines. So true. Well written!
Little girl Big world 2009-09-27 . chapter 3
This is a very powerful chapter and it's very brave of you to be able to write about it and post it.
Keep at writing, because you're very good at it :)
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