Yay! it's such a good thing Yukari told Usagi's grandmother about the bullies! They're so gonna get what they deserve! On another note, NO! Don't discontinue this story! I love it! I really love it...and Usagi too! I can really relate to her! But I hope everything goes well for your other stories. I'd really hate to see this one dropped.

Why won't Usagi tell Matsuyama-sensei she's being picked on? She should know that other people can help! Heck, I was just recently picked on by some girl on my bus I don't even know and I told my mom about it just now! Usagi should tell the teachers that Chieko and her clique are doing bad things!...plus I hope Masaru's family gets to meet Usagi. Who knows? Maybe Sumiko will come to like Usagi a lot! And ugh, speaking of Chieko, I'm glad Usagi didn't flunk the exams, even though she got water poured on her. I don't like girls like Chieko. So selfish and prissy! I did see some errors, but I love this, plus Satin Doll!

The error I mostly noticed is when Shuya approached Matsuyama-sensei and he asks about her being bullied, but the mistake you made was that you made him say that Usagi was bullying, not that she was being bullied. But I can see through it. It's okay! I love this story! Keep up the good work!

Usagi is in junior high now. You kept in Chikako, Sakurako, Hanako, Shuuya, Yukari and Shouta. That's what I like to see! And Chieko is so mean! Now that Usagi has an aide, she should let her aide defend her against bullies and stuff!...and by the way, you kind of mispelled "junior". It's not "juinor". I see some gramatical errors, but I don't mind. I hope to see more soon! I'm loving it so far!

WHAT?!? YOU DELETED ROSE RED?!? Aw! I liked it too! Oh well. I like this too! But I can understand why Masaru wouldn't want to raise his daughter with his new wife, but he could at least give her a chance! Who knows? Maybe Sumiko will welcome Usagi with open arms or something! That jerk! But I am loving this so far...but wait, if Usagi really is autistic, then wouldn't she not be able to talk when she's about 2-3 years old? Her grandmother would have to find out soon and put her in a special program to help her and stuff. Just saying. But this is good so far!...though I wish you didn't delete Rose Red. I loved that story so much.