I loved the scope and theme of this poem. For me I got a strong since of rebirth, and change. There was also reflection and regression in there as well. It was kind of like watching the change that comes form being a child to being an adult.

The only thing I noticed was just that it got a little rambly at times, which caused the overall message to become a bit convoluted, but other then that the piece was great, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)

"Utter nothingness, and I can't tell if there is comfort in that." I love this line - it's so wonderfully mind-blowing and thought-provoking. :)

"I have lost nothing." This is, by far, my favourite line - it's perfect in every way. :D