"We curled our fingers into collar bones." Creative imagery.

"Lightning glanced off the bones..." Wow. The imagery here is both unique and enchanting.

"Nothing trapped us, we coagulated." Aha. I love the fact that the tone of the word 'coagulated' is so nonchalant here.

"Silent laughter nagged like a gypsy." Stunning simile. :D

interesting reflection,the imagery is full of strenght and meaning, I really like the whole poem.