Strangeness and cuteness. Also very enjoyable.

This story is really cute. I wonder what happened the next day lol.

very good. i really liked it.

hehe... that was cool. I loved Michael... and his idea of making you Shut up... haha :D

Aw good job! Sounds like there's a cute story to come :)

Very cool, very cute! god job!

Okay, so in all honestly, the writing style is REALLY choppy. But that story is really cute. i could predict what was going to happen, but still, it was cute to see it all unfold. I want to see where you go with this.

looks very predictable, make it unique!