Very entertaining and very clever.

"Make it a long one." I like the tone of this line. The reader can definitely tell that Mona is upset with Joe.

"Pete said you buy souls." Ahahaha. Brilliant line.

The ending is perfect and hilarious--Inflation as Hell!

loved it! i like how your charcter's dialogue is so believable, natural. your one-shots are priceless! great!!

Haha. I love the subtle jabs through out and your end lines are priceless. Great job.

(Insert evil cackle here)
The Devil is in the details, you're right!

:) Clever especially in this modern times.

haha! hilarious ending! I loved it.

This was your best political satire yet. You are able to provide politics, humor, and plot in your stories, and still keep them interesting. Great job on this one.

Another good story I loved the remark about inflation.

~SirScott

A comment on the economy today? Nice!