aww i luv stories like these. but wat i love the most is wen high school sweethearts end up married with kids. that rarely happens in real life. thats y i love reading it in books so much! ]

Brilliant story!

I am going to miss Sam, Jack, Nicole, and all the other characters...even though i only read this for, umm...one day...

" It was a super cute story so i got hooked.

Awesome Job!

Aw! I can't believe it's over! It was a really sweet story and I'm going to miss Jack and Nicole! I feel like I'm saying goodbye to my best friends! :(

haha, i wonder what would happen when she found out James is Jake

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Ah, I can't wait to read for the next chapter. :D

I like this story! When you say 'Will' make sure it looks like that rather than 'will' people will get confused... That's almost the only flaw I noticed...!

Eek! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

It sounds good now. The previous chapter makes more sense now that you took out the other stuff. It just confused me for a bit there. But yeah, I think it's funny how everyone but Nicole knows that Jack's her mystery date. And man, her parents irk me!

I just found your story and loved it (;

Jack is just so sweet! can't wait for Nicole to see that her mystery date is actually Jack (:

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Aw ... Great chapter! Love it!

Can't wait for the next one!

Aw ... So sweet!

Thanks for replying to my PM! I know it was probably really annoying, but I just had to ask!

idk, it just seems that they're too young to "fall in love" What are they? 16? I just dont see it happening. And there are several loopholes in this story

what was Matt doing at the airport and why does he even care to explain things anymore?

why did Jack's parents, as responsible adults, go along with Nicole's plans?

Nicole can't legally buy her own plane ticket since she's under age

the airport staff can get fired for letting someone pass into unauthorized areas

I'm sorry, I know it's not my place to be saying this since it's not my story, but I just thought I'd point those things out incase you wanted to go back and edit your story later on.

idk, it's just that even after everything, leaving just seems too irrational. I just dont see how she can just decide to leave like that!

Aw ... No! She can't leave him! It's torture! For both of them!

She isn't going to leave him. Right? RIGHT?

Eek! *does happy dance*

I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! Mwahahahaha!

Sorry about my breakdown ... I blame it on too much coffee. Anyway, it was a great chapter, but I'm sad for Nicole! I mean, a new sister/brother at her age! I'd kill my mom!

Also, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!