Excellent metaphor. The execution is fantastic - it all reads smoothly, and the rhymes are good. Really great job!

That is a rather drastic metaphor for the passing time and the fact there’s nothing we can do against it. I hope you will soon skate uphill again.

Franziska

P.S. I love the rhyme “faster – past her”!
P.P.S. schön, dass du mal wieder ein Gedicht geschrieben hast!