 simpleplan13 2009-09-05 . chapter 1I love the first line. Using a five syllable word is really great in a haiku.
I may sound stupid, but I have no idea way a Quercus is. Maybe an A/N explaining it?
I have to say though, the line breaks seemed force for the syllable count and the repetition of hear seemed a bit much. Still it was a good piece.
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