Things are really picking up! Man, I feel bad for Sajani and Iwao, but I still have to compoliment Lucifer on his Amazing job of toying with minds. Seriously, he can mindfuck anyone. Oo; That's why he's the ultimate evil!

Oh, NO!! Where is chapter eleventh? Come out, come out wherever you are!! Please? Pretty Please? I really LOVE this wonderfully enchanting story and I would hate to see it go into HIATUS or DISCONTINUED. Please don't be mean... As soon as you can, please be nice and update!! Sorry if I offend you, just wanna show you how much I LOVE ROMANCING LUCIFER!!

please...don't ever let this particular story ROMANCING LUCIFER ever go into hiatus. i'm truly looking forward for chapter 11. I really love this story. please be sure 2 update soon. i was hoping i would see the next chapter up today or tomorrow.

Man, Lucifer really finds it amusing that Seraj is in pain over things. XD He's such a sadist, and it's funny. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you had a happy Thanksgiving!

The irony of this being in a church was interesting and so was the confession booth scene. Lucifer is an absolute genius when it comes to mental torture and playing on people's emotions. I like how Seraj tried to seek solace in Christianity to get himself away from Lucifer. Also , I find it funny in a way that Seraj felt sorry for Lucifer when he pictured him dying.

You portray Lucifer's hate for God in a profound way as well. It's a very bitter, yet hurt way and I have to wonder what your take on that situation is. Perhaps I read into things far too much, but I really think there's something more going on between them than the normal fiction would see.

Wow, this chapter was so exciting! At times, I don't know if I love Lucifer or hate him. He's so interesting and yet, he is so evil at the same time. I really love how you made the plot move with the cross saber and everything! It's so freaking cool! Lucifer makes me wonder more and more. He really is a deep character in an odd way.

Boy, what an amazing story!! I totally love it!! I hope you can update very SOON!! I'm looking very forward to the next contract!! Sajani's revenge?! Interesting... Poor Seraj can't get a break, can he? I wonder how did Sajani plan to extract her revenge? Will she tell Seraj's parents about Lucifer? Or will she go mad in her grief and attempt to kill Seraj? But in his guilt, Seraj probably let Sajani took a stab, maybe (like subaru from tokyo babylon when yuuya's mad mother attack him?)? And...and...of course, Lucifer would be there 2 stop her, right (like seishirou protect subaru from yuuya's mad mother and got wounded)? Although if Lucifer did get hurt in protecting Seraj, I doubt Seraj would pity him or something... Can't wait to see your take on the next chapter!! Please do hurry!! Love you!!

more tragedies... i pity seraj. next chapter please~!! can't wait for it~! be sure 2 update as soon as possible!!

for some reason this chapter reminded me of a similar incident of the manga "akuma no hanayome or Demos's bride". it is about a demon and a girl he wanted to be his bride. the girl's name is minako and she hates him. she went to the priest to seek help. there is incident of the demon called demos tricked the priest to kill a woman whom he thought is zombie. the woman has a sickness that makes her heart stop for a period of time but then it will start again. she left a letter about it to warn people but demos stole the letter on purpose and dump her body on the grayeyard where the priest decided to put in a coffin. the woman awake and got angry (she does look like zombie at this point) and the priest kill her with a sword that supposedly can kill demon or something (you know the priest also recommended minako to use the sword on demos but she's very hesitatent about it like seraj does and at the end when she found out demos's evil scheme she was enraged and yelled that she would like to stab him with the sword if the sword is in her hand). weird, huh?

YES~~!! A new chapter!! Lucky me~~!! Thank you for updating!! Hope to seethe next chapter ASAP. As usual good luck with your other stories. Hurry up and focus on this story as soon as you can. Poor Iwao and Sajani. If seraj told sajani about iwao, wouldn't she hate him now? Lucifer really ruined those two... But I really wish to see more scene of Lucifer trying to seduce seraj rather than see him targeting the people around seraj. Poor seraj...the guilt must be hurting him... I guess it must happen. But I doubt seraj would be willing 2 surrender to lucifer, perhaps reluctantly to save the life of his friends? What about his parents? Will Lucifer show up before them as well? Will seraj's parents abandon their son because of it? Write more please!! I can hardly wait for thr next chapter.

I like how you're fleshing out Ukayou and Saionji and about their relationship more, even right up to what happened to them later on in this chapter.

The repetition of "blood-red eyes" felt a bit redundant. It could just be me, though, but I think just having "eyes" in one sentence is enough.

Also, I think that the part where Ukayou and Saionji fell to their fate could be shown. Maybe remove "dead" to let the readers fill in the gaps. Sorry if this is confusing. I don't want to spoil anything for the other people who are reading this story. ^^;; You did a good job in making this part emotional, although there could be more showing than telling.

{A human in love was like a pus-filled sore, disgusting to observe.} I have to say that this is a very good sentence. It's so brutal, so good job with the imagery here! :D

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Corrections/Feedback:

{“It will be more then one this time.”} than.

{She had to admit that a love the transcended time was a beautiful thing in her own opinion but she was not about to admit that weakness in front of her god.} I think there should be a comma after "opinion."

{Against all odd, he would always love her.} I think its "odds."

{“He has a crush on my but I DO NOT like him!”} me.

{The now hysterical girl screamed as the began to punch him in the chest and cry.} "the began" should be "she began."

{The blonde stopped dead in her tracks a she stared at the God before her.} "a" should be "as."

{He was cut off by the angel.} This could be dropped. I think the dialogue during this part would show it.

This just keeps getting darker and darker. It's even horroresque. If I had to say so, this chapter is a horror chapter. Lucifer is showing that he means business. I think Seraj should really be in fear about now.

I really like what Lucifer said about love that transcends time. Man, he's one guy you love to hate isn't he? It's sad, he's actually my favorite character. He's just so witty and clever that it's hard not to like him.

Man, too bad Saionji and Ukyou only noticed what was happening at the last second. They could have been saved but Seraj wouldn't be a clusterfuck or organs on the floor either.

I even felt bad for Yaone in this chapter. Man, that's deep.

This chapter was interesting, not only in character development, but the love transcending time element was interesting. It shows the more tragic side to that statement, since most people say it in such a romantic light. I'm convinced that you could make anything dark and tragic. XD