your writing style is great! no compliments!

your way of bringing back memories was flawless. it went the way it would've in real life.

and it was a very touching one-shot, it reminded me of my grandmas. i got inspired to write something about my grandma that i would publish here sometime and i would also mention your story as to where i got the inspiration.

loved it~ it warmed my heart for a moment there. thank you

(reviewed for the FRG)

Hallo! Thank you muchly for spreading the Review Love in RM! Here is some lovin' in return!

I like the simplicity of the piece. Very straightforward and almost childlike style that makes it appealing. However I did think there was a disconnect between the beginning where she had negative memories (no more this, no more that) and the really sweet crux of the piece (the memory of the cake). That made it hard to tell what exactly she felt about the woman in question.

The enitre cake scene was well written so good job!

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Review Squader Bubbles :P

I really like the idea of trying to comfort your memories. It's so odd, but the creativity is fabulous, and I think it's clever. It seemed fitting too in the context of the story.

The choppy writing style worked well. Sometimes I don't like it, but in this, for the mourning scene and trying to drag up memories, the choppiness was more consistent than anything else. :) I think it complimented the actions.

While the piece is short, I still like it. The idea is simple and clean, and I enjoyed reading. Your character was interesting, too. Different.

Congrats on the RM!

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-Peach/Kate

Well done. I like the contrast between your ending and your beginning. It's haunting. I also like how you named her Brenna. This seems like a weird thing to like but when you give a character a semi uncommon name it makes the character more memorable. Good work!