your poetry makes me smile :)

"It glows for you, only you, in the dark with a satellite pill." Whoa. Lordy Lordy. What a brilliant line. I really like the repetition of the line, "one lonely forest fern," as well - it's both haunting and beautiful. :)

Wow. You're obviously a very talented poet. I love the structure of this poem, especially, and the image of the "satellite pill."

some really challenging
stuff here, tyth.