I like how short you made this simply because I think that it adds to the power of the piece. I like the simplicity of it, and the parentheses you used were somewhat haunting. And I really liked the "no capitalization" principle utilized here.
I loved it.

Yours truly,
Luna Turner

He must be a soccer fan in he won't take you without the glove. Maybe love is only as strong as the leather that holds the glove tight to your arm.

I really like it. :D.