|Reviews for i wish i could defy|
| Icrome 11/20/09 . chapter 1
damn this is good
| fatbird33 11/6/09 . chapter 1
"but i would take imagination
over reality any day.)"
| Mirabella 9/27/09 . chapter 1
Love the idea in the last stanza! And the imagery in the first is genius. :)
| gg. lass 9/23/09 . chapter 1
i loved the line "the sky is peeling off/ in sheets of scattered blue"
yours until the wind changes,
| Little girl Big world 9/20/09 . chapter 1
Love the imagery in the first stanza. The ending parenthesis are so breath taking. & I feel I understand because I feel the same way. Beautifully written. :)
| Isca 9/10/09 . chapter 1
"Love cannot save us anymore." That's a very sad thought. It appears as though the love that these people share isn't strong enough anymore to withstand certain obstacles. It makes me wonder: was their love really 'true,' to begin with? This line is obviously very thought-provoking. :)
| tonight we bloom 9/6/09 . chapter 1
WELCOME BACK! I've been eagerly anticipating new work of yours!
This is beautiful. The first two lines have a wonderful tone and I love the image of the sky "peeling," that's a great great image.
This is really moving.
| simpleplan13 9/4/09 . chapter 1
One part confused me. The part about blinking back happiness. The tone here seemed sad.
I did like the piece though. The beginning is an a great opening really drew me in. I also thought your descriptions in the third and fourth line were really powerful. Great ending also.
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| Alyosha Karamazov 9/1/09 . chapter 1
I loved "the sky is peeling off
in sheets of scattered blue"
| BlueSapphire92 8/31/09 . chapter 1
Wow... short but beautiful and so much meaning.
| unshattered 8/31/09 . chapter 1
I really like the ending, nice piece.
| Faithless Juliet 8/30/09 . chapter 1
I loved the lines: ‘the sky is peeling off/in sheets of scattered blue’ with special emphasis on the words ‘peeling’ and ‘scattered’ it makes me think of the sky as a huge cubist painting. It was very inspiring.
I could tell that the rest of the poem was very personal to you, which is great for the reader to emotionally connect to the writer. I see you haven't posted anything in a while, welcome back, and keep up the good work.