*shivers* Now I'm curious about the vampire who made that woman his wife. Dear Ra, that's a smexy poem!

I love this! Of course I always love good vampire stuff, but I also really like the rhymes because they're not cheesy. My favorite lines are "the sting of forever" and I never wanted forever that night in December."

This is really good, but why don't all the words in the fourth stanza all rhyme? The last lines are perfect, they seem to resonate.